读后续写“自由八股文”的手把手示范

读后续写“自由八股文”的手把手示范

前言：任何作文，只要是应试作文，就必然有套路，这个不是以人的意志为转移的，

否则就无法做到公平公正地去评分。但是套路有高低之分的。高级的就属于个人独有的写作风格了。

大部分这个套路只能在大量实践中才能总结出来。今天这个八股文模式，形式并非死板一块，而是非常自由的，做了多次修改，可以说终于达到了第五档（20+）了。虽说是模板，但是此模板并非让你直接填词的哦，必要的思维拓展和用词积累还是必须具备的。

希望本文对广大考生有借鉴作用。

这个模板中的每个句子都是非常讲究的，请读者看下面的例子，可以说能应用在任何场合下（后面还需要不断润色）。十四个左右的句子涵盖：

1.无灵主语； 2.独立主格； 3.分词作状语； 4.形容词短语作状语； 5.定语从句； 6.what和it句型； 7.倒装句； 8.强调句； 9.状语从句 10.感叹句

自由八股文模式：

（1）情绪：消极情绪（有时积极） （2）细节：进一步解释描写 （3）转折：个人的努力或借助外界

（4）转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰 （5）失望：但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题 （6）新法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法） （7）结局：过了一段时间；事情有了最后的转折 （8）总结：点题，呼应前文

例子：

（2016年10月，浙江高考）

夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子独自离开，迷路在树林里，直升飞机来了几次援救但没有看见她，她感到很失望。

But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. 续写 1. A wave of terror swept over her. 2. Her heart pounding fiercely and her palms sweating, an inner voice told her that she had to find a safe place. 八股文思路 （情绪） （细节详述情绪） 3. Tired and terrified as she was, Jane plucked her courage to feel the way. （转折：个人努力） 4. Luckily, it didn’t take long before she found a cave. 5. Sighing with relief, she felt a glimmer of hope, saying to herself, “Tomorrow is another day.” 6. With that, she went to sleep, in whose dream her husband kept her company. （转机：成功，希望来了） （衔接句）

It was daybreak when Jane woke up. 1. Hungry and disappointed, she found not any helicopter overhead, at a loss what to do. 2. It suddenly dawned on her that she should find a big open area first. 3. Having gobbling down some blackberries, she can’t wait to set off. 4. After what seemed a century, such an area did come into sight. 5. Her face brightened up. (主要问题) （突然有了办法） （开始做） （成功了） （感受） 6. What a coincidence that meanwhile, a helicopter was flying towards her. （结果解决问题：无7. Upon its landing, out dashed her husband who hugged Jane tightly, tear巧不成书，欢喜） s welling up in their heart. 8. It was at that moment that they decided not to quarrel any more but learned to compromise. 2.（2018年6月，浙江高考） 父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。临走叔叔告诫我们不要走偏了路（\"Don’t be late for supper,\" Uncle Paul cried, \"and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!\"）。一路上，风景优美，让人陶醉。 Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. （总结） 续写 1. A wave of nervousness swept over me especially when the horse ran like crazy. 2. My heart pounding and my palms sweating, an inner voice told me that I had to calm down. 3. Though in a panic, I plucked my courage to pull on the reigns. 4. Luckily, it didn’t take long before I settled down the horse. 5. Just at that moment, Dad ran over, gasping for air. 6. “Boy, we are way off the track.” He said seriously, a look of concern spreading across his face. 八股文思路 （情绪） （细节详述） （转折：个人努力） （转机：成功，希望来了） （衔接句：新问题来了）

Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. 1. Hungry and frustrated, we tried to find a way out but in vain. 2. It suddenly dawned on me we could rode down the river nearby. 3. Unexpectedly, the river brought us to the familiar track at last. 4. After what seemed two hours, Uncle Paul’s farm house did come into sight. 5. My father’s face brightened up, so did mine. 6. Upon our arrival, Uncle Paul couldn’t wait to asked us, “Where have you been? I am just calling 911.” 7. “To Alice’s Wonderland” my father answered, winking at me with a big grin. 8. What an unforgettable experience we had!

3. 南京学情检测

Looking after thousands of turtles, day after day, was no easy task.

1. From morning to night, turtles fed, water changed and floor mopped, Albert felt extremely exhausted, as if on the verge of collapsing. （感受：疲劳）

2. Reduced to being home the whole day, he plucked up courage to face the fact，often close to tears.

3. Now, even a glance of his book became a luxury. （详细描述感受）

4. “Poor boy, you can find a way out in time,” sighed his parents, patting him on the shoulder and leaving.

5. Albert had no idea what to do. However, one day, he found a strange thing and felt a ray of hope. （问题的解决方法：外界的力量）

6. With decreasing time on computer games was the number of turtles also in decline. （衔接句）

When Albert forgot about his beloved computer games, the turtles disappeared. 1. He even couldn’t be bothered to ask the reason.

2. Now his curiosity gave way to his excitement as if he was relieved of a huge burden.（感受）

3. More relieved than shocked were his parents who hugged him tightly，trembling with delight and urged him to go out.（父母的感受）

4. After what seemed a century, he couldn’t wait to open the door, a ray of warm sunshine flooding in. （主人公的解决问题方法：回归现实） 5. His face lit up.（想法）

6. “The doorway to my world is to embrace the real world, isn’t it?” he winked at his parents, grinning from ear to ear. （结尾呼应手段点题）

(总结) (努力，失败) （突然有了办法） （开始做） （成功了） （感受） （幽默对话）